p2880 ([info]p2880) wrote in [info]monroeslittle,
Wonderful ending to a great story! Thank you!

Really liked the banter in the car between Logan and his sons, the detail such as Logan driving his car over the curb and Alicia's cooking skills, V scheduling a vasectomy for Logan. Really funny!

But the best part was the flashback and the realization that Marlie was the making of Logan Echolls. Although he was doing better as a sophomore, he really rose to the challenge and it made him be the happy, adult, good man we see today.

Thanks also for the timing of each posting. I think it really added to the suspense and development of the story. You did a masterful job of weaving in all your characters. I loved that Marlie, Jason, and Ben have distinct personalities. The minor characters all played significant roles in the the plot. I could picture them in my mind as older versions of the ones I saw on the small screen. Bravo for a great story!


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